unfinished 6

[bardiphouka]

You were sacred you were naked
but you held to your virginity
as though it were some deity's
icon for the day

when you left I heard that lovers
uncovered bits of you
that you had me agree
to let stay

I could say that we weren't lovers
like that within our time
but the truth is that would be
just one more fable

the only difference was
within our feast of love
your pleasure was all
that filled the table

Comments

[g0jir0.livejournal.com]

I like this!

[bardiphouka.livejournal.com]

I would probably like it better if it were not a true story

[g0jir0.livejournal.com]

Ouch. Although part of the reason I like it is the anger that seeps from it.

[bardiphouka.livejournal.com]

for the record of course , the song is not about kelbardi. But I think that is part of being a good writer..the ability remember past emotions from prior relationships, actions etc

[g0jir0.livejournal.com]

Whew. I wasn't sure, and I'm glad to know it's about someone else.