Wow, very powerful piece. Would you mind clarifying this piece of line for me? and love turned destroyer? I’m not sure if I’m reading it right. It seems that there may be a word missing. Other than that, there really isn’t anything else for me to point out. Though your pattern seems to imply that your third to last line does not mean to end with a period? Wonderful poem again. Thanks for the read~
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Date: 2012-04-16 02:25 pm (UTC)Would you mind clarifying this piece of line for me?
and love turned destroyer?
I’m not sure if I’m reading it right. It seems that there may be a word missing.
Other than that, there really isn’t anything else for me to point out.
Though your pattern seems to imply that your third to last line does not mean to end with a period?
Wonderful poem again. Thanks for the read~